Question

8．人人都希望生活在環(huán)境優(yōu)美的城市中，作為中學(xué)生，我們要積極為創(chuàng)建"文明城市"作貢獻(xiàn)．請你根據(jù)下列圖表所給提示詞寫一篇發(fā)言稿． 
要求：（1）語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，文章 中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名．
（2）必須運(yùn)用所有提示詞，并寫出兩個(gè)以上自己的觀點(diǎn)．
（3）詞數(shù)在 80 詞左右
 Civilized（文明）City 

good behavior		excellent environment
should	don't	can	had better not
talk politely	traffic rules	plant	your ideas
be friendly to		pick up litter
	loudly
help		clean the small ads

Everybody likes to live in a beautiful and civilized city．We hope that our city will become a civilized city．We know it includes good behavior and excellent environment．So I want everyone can do something for it To good behavior，we should be friendly to others，talk with other people politely and help some people in trouble．Please don't break the traffic rules or talk loudly in public．To excellent environment，I think we can plant trees，pick up the litter and clean the small ads on the wall．You'd better not waste water or walk on the grassland．
Thank you for your support．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)方框所給的內(nèi)容寫作文．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
高分句型（一）．To good behavior，we should be friendly to others，talk with other people politely and help some people in trouble 在良好行為上，我們應(yīng)該貴他人友善，和他人禮貌地說話以及幫助困難中的人們．（be friendly to…對…友善； in trouble，處在困境中）
高分句型（二）．You'd better not waste water or walk on the grassland．你最好不要浪費(fèi)水喝在草坪上走．（had better （not）do sth．最好做…，其后接動(dòng)詞原形．）

解答 Everybody likes to live in a beautiful and civilized city．We hope that our city will become a civilized city．We know it includes good behavior and excellent environment．So I want everyone can do something for it．（提出自己的觀點(diǎn)） To good behavior，we should be friendly to others，talk with other people politely and help some people in trouble．（高分句型一）Please don't break the traffic rules or talk loudly in public．To excellent environment，I think we can plant trees，pick up the litter and clean the small ads on the wall．（分別從良好的行為和好的環(huán)境兩個(gè)方面闡述）You'd better not waste water or walk on the grassland．（高分句型二）
    Thank you for your support．（最后對聽眾表示感謝）

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