Question

7．目前，有些中學生在"崇尚節(jié)儉，文明做人（advocating thrift and being civilized）"方面做得不夠好，在校園里有時會看到以下圖片中的情形．請你根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容進行描述，并自擬一條你在校園內(nèi)看到的一種不良現(xiàn)象，并就中學生如何"杜絕浪費，文明做人"提出 至少一點建議．
要求：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名、人名．
  2．語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范．
  3．詞數(shù)80左右．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

leave the tap on                         throw the food away                       drop rubbish everywhere

Some middle school students aren't doing enough in"advocating thrift and being civilized"．
                                                         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①We're sorry to see so much waste in some schools!在一些學�？吹饺绱硕嗟睦速M好難過．be sorry to do sth對做某事感到抱歉（難過）．
②It makes others feel uncomfortable，especially in summer．這會讓其他人感到不舒服，尤其是在夏天．這里make sb do sth表示讓某人做某事，后面跟動詞的原形．

解答 Some middle school students aren't doing enough in"advocating thrift and being civilized"．（引出話題）
  We're sorry to see so much waste in some schools!（高分句型）Some students have many bad habits．for example，some students often leave the taps on after washing their hands，At the dining hall，a lot of food is thrown away on the table after the meals．in the classroom，we often find that a lot of waste paper isn't dropped in the right place．It makes others feel uncomfortable，especially in summer（高分句型）．What's worse，Some students often push in before others，I think it is rude．（舉例說明在校園里的不良現(xiàn)象）
As middle school students，we should save water and electricity．Don't waste food．It's very necessary for us to keep the environment around us clean and tidy．Let's do it from now on!（我的觀點及建議）

點評 本題是一篇看圖作文，內(nèi)容比較簡單，要求考生按照所給圖畫，通過合理的聯(lián)想將一組畫面的內(nèi)容正確地表達出來．考查了學生的觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)新能力以及遣詞造句、組句成篇的書面表達能力．寫作時要注意展開想象，否則文章會不太通順，所以必須依據(jù)圖畫細節(jié)對畫面的內(nèi)容加以想象、擴充或補充．