Question

【題目】1.你叫李明，陽光中學(xué)八年級學(xué)生

2.最喜愛的科目是生物，對各種鳥類植物感興趣

3.想成為觀鳥協(xié)會的一員，了解更多鳥類知識

4.做點事保護鳥類，星期日下午2-5點可以參加活動.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chairperson ,

I would like to join the Bird watching Society.

First, Let me introduce myself. My name is Li Ming. I am a Grade 8 student at Sunshine Middle School. My favourite subject is Biology. I am very interested in learning different kinds of birds, animals and plants. I want to become a member of the Bird watching society and learn more about birds. I want to do something to protect birds. I like birds and plants. I can take part in activities from 2.pm to 5.pm on Sunday afternoon.

I will be very happy if I can become a member of the Bird watching Society. My telephone number is 5558-6930.

yours sincerely,

Liming

【解析】

試題分析:

這是一篇提綱類作文。本題給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點展開寫作。根據(jù)所給材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。寫作中注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。給出的要點都要寫到文章中。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用的句式短語較為簡單. 主要是主謂結(jié)構(gòu)。但是通過一些這些簡單句式的靈活搭配，使得文章避免單純的重復(fù)，使得短文既通俗易懂又邏輯清楚。