Question

【題目】根據(jù)要求完成大作文（共15分）

近日華東地區(qū)連續(xù)被霧霾覆蓋，這對人們的身體，工作，生活產(chǎn)生很大影響。請根據(jù)提示詞，寫一篇關(guān)于霧霾的文章。（詞數(shù)在60-80之間）

要求：1.霧霾天氣產(chǎn)生的原因 2.你的看法和建議

提示詞：霧霾haze 燃煤burn coal cut down factory pollution

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently ，East China has been covered by fog and haze for days in a row，which causes great trouble to people’s life。As is shown from the picture, this serious situation results from many aspects. Vehicles exhaust is the first to blame, which makes up half of the total exhaust. Industrial exhaust is another cause. It accounts for 38%. Besides, gas emission from residents is only8% and 4% from power station. These four kinds of exhaust lead to fog and haze happening more and more.

Things must be done to deal with the situation. First, stricter laws should be made to prevent atmosphere from being polluted. What’s more, the number of cars, which is on the top of the list, should be banned from increasing. Finally, people’s awareness of protecting environment should be increased so that all of us could contribute to improving the situation. To conclude, the key to solving this problem is strict laws as well as education.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文多次使用表示先后順序的詞，使文章非常條例。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。