Question

【題目】寫作

假設(shè)你叫李俊，你的美國朋友David想要在中國結(jié)交更多的朋友。你通過電子郵件，把你的最好的朋友王明介紹給他。王明情況見下表：

姓名	王明
年齡	15
外貌	方臉，大眼睛，短發(fā)，高個子；
個性	誠實，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，從不說他人壞話；
愛好	癡迷于DIY, 上周給我做了一張生日卡片；
其他情況	1、對了解不同種類的鳥類感興趣，是觀鳥協(xié)會的一員； 2、最喜歡冬季，因為他喜歡堆雪人，打雪仗；
理想	嗓音好，喜歡唱歌，長大后想成為一名歌手；

要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下連貫；

2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

4）不使用真實姓名和校名等。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you.

He is 15 years old. He is tall with two big eyes. He is tall and has short hair.

Wang Ming has a good sense of humor. He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy. He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends. He never says a bad word about others.

He is crazy about DIY. It was my birthday last week. He made a birthday card for me. He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society. Among/Of the four seasons, he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends.

He has a good voice and is good at singing. So he wants to be a singer when he grows up.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can. Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

【解析】這是一篇話題作文，作文題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了要求。寫作文時要仔細審題，每一條都要寫到，注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點，必要時可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

文章主要寫介紹王明，要點全部都寫出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求。文中使用很多短語，讓文章更加出彩，如with two big eyes.，keep secrets，says a bad word about others , is interested in，taking trains”等。在平時的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點滴積累，這樣在寫作文時才能靈活運用。