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【題目】本學(xué)期即將結(jié)束，寒假即將開始。假如你是Linda，請你以 My School Life為題，給你的美國朋友Sally寫一封信告訴她你的學(xué)校生活(內(nèi)容可涉及學(xué)習(xí)、運(yùn)動、興趣等。)至少寫5句。

My School Life

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My School Life

Dear Sally,

How are you? This term will end, and I tell you something about my school life. My school life is very interesting. I like it very much. At school , my teachers are very friendly to me.Classes begin at 8：00a.m. I study English, math, history , art and some other subjects. English is my favorite subject, and I often speak English with my classmates. But I don’t like math. I think it's a little difficult and boring. We do morning exercise every day at school. I can also do outdoor activities every day at school . Can you tell me something about your school life?

Yours

Linda

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給話題作文，以Linda的名義給你的美國朋友Sally寫一封信告訴她你的學(xué)校生活。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My school life is...，I like...， English is...，I can...，Can you....？等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，結(jié)合話題要求闡述你的學(xué)習(xí)、興趣和運(yùn)動。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭問候sally,并且告訴她你的學(xué)校生活有趣，接下來介紹我的學(xué)習(xí)和運(yùn)動，最后希望Sally告訴你她的學(xué)校生活情況。此處tell sb about sth, at school, speak English, do morning exercise, every day, outdoor activities等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。