Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) (本大題共5分)

當(dāng)前，你們學(xué)校正開展“好書伴我成長”活動。請你根據(jù)活動主題并結(jié)合表格中所給的信息，以Growing up with good books 為題，用英語寫一篇80詞以上的倡議書，向?qū)W校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。倡議書的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

讀書的益處	獲取知識，增長見識，使人快樂
存在的現(xiàn)象	聽音樂、看電視、上網(wǎng)占用了大部分業(yè)余時間
發(fā)出倡議	多讀書，讀經(jīng)典好書；向世界傳播中國傳統(tǒng)文化(Spread / introduce the traditional Chinese culture to… )；讓讀書誠為我們生活的一部分

Growing up with good books

My dear friends

Reading is very important.

Answer 1

【答案】

Growing up with good books

My dear friends,

Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. We can improve our knowlegde if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn.

However, some students spend much time listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to advise you to read more books, especially classical good books. And we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.

Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!

【解析】

試題分析： 這是一篇提綱類作文。文章圍繞成長與讀書來展開，主要講讀書的益處，現(xiàn)在同學(xué)中存在的讀書問題，以及提出倡導(dǎo)。題目中把要點已列出來，寫作時要包括這些要點，但不能逐字逐句翻譯，要將其有機(jī)的組織起來。比如用一些連接詞和承啟句，增強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。這是一篇倡議書，可以用第一人稱，語言可以有號召性些。

寫作亮點：這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)非常清楚，內(nèi)容完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流暢。文中使用了一些精彩的長句，例如 It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier.它不僅可以開闊我們的視野，還可以讓我們更聰明和開心。The more we read, the more we will learn.我們讀的越多，學(xué)到的就越多。So I would like to advise you to read more books, especially classical good books所以我建議你們多讀書，尤其是經(jīng)典的好書。另外文中用來一些連接詞，如 However然而，將第一段和第二段的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表現(xiàn)出來；So所以，And而且，等。