Question

假如你是Bill, 你的好朋友Sam發(fā)來電子郵件，請你下周末去他家做客。你下周末沒空不能去。請用e-mail回復(fù)Sam，并說明不能在下周末拜訪他的三條原因，50詞左右。(5分)

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Sam,

 I am very glad you can invite me to your home next weekend. I would like to go but I’m afraid I can’t. First of all, I have a test next Monday, so I have to study for the test. The test is very important because it makes up 30% of the final exam. I must do well in it. Also, I have to finish my homework. What’s more, I have to stay at home helping my mother do some housework. I wish I can go next time.

                                                                                    Bill

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文是一個開放式作文。文中為我們安排好了主題，但是主體部分需要我們自己來補(bǔ)充完成，就是你要想出三條拒絕Sam 的理由。通過分析我們可知這篇短文主要用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時。注意行文連貫，運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文寫得相當(dāng)不錯，文章表達(dá)完整，運(yùn)用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，表達(dá)也比較流暢。其中寫得比較好的句子I would like to go but I’m afraid I can’t、 he test is very important because it makes up 30% of the final exam、 I have to stay at home helping my mother do some housework等，運(yùn)用的句型很準(zhǔn)確，句式較復(fù)雜。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。