Question

健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。

健康的重要性 保持健康的方法

健康比金錢重要…… 健康飲食：

多吃水果蔬菜；少吃油膩食物 摒棄（get rid of）不良習(xí)慣：要吃早飯；飯前洗手；早睡早起，不熬夜。 多鍛煉，強(qiáng)身健體。

要求：把握要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不逐字翻譯。詞數(shù)在80左右。.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Health is far more important than money. Good health can help us enjoy our life while poor health leads to illness.

Firstly, we should eat healthily. It is important for us to take more fruit and vegetables. We should eat less rich food. Secondly, we have to get rid of bad habits. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the morning. Don’t forget to wash your hands before meals. Staying up late at night is bad for our health. It’s better for us to go to bed early and get up early. Finally, we’d better take enough exercise to make our bodies strong. 

【解析】試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)所給中文提示語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明健康的重要性和 保持健康的方法，如多吃水果蔬菜；少吃油膩食物；摒棄（get rid of）不良習(xí)慣：要吃早飯；飯前洗手；早睡早起，不熬夜。 多鍛煉，強(qiáng)身健體。

本文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，并要正確運(yùn)用與健康飲食、生活相關(guān)的詞語(yǔ)和句式。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文要點(diǎn)齊全、行文連貫、層次清楚。首先點(diǎn)出健康的重要性。然后用Firstly,Secondly,表達(dá)兩個(gè)方面。正確運(yùn)用相關(guān)的詞語(yǔ)和句式如：It is important for us to….；get rid of bad habits；take enough exercise Staying up late at night is bad.等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。