Question

【題目】張濤是一名九年級學(xué)生，面對繁重的學(xué)業(yè)和升學(xué)壓力，他總是感到焦慮不安，晚上還經(jīng)常失眠。請根據(jù)你所學(xué)的知識，針對他的問題，運用色彩療法給他提些建議。

要求：1、書寫工整，語言連貫；

????? 2、詞數(shù)：80詞左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

Dear Zhang Tao,

I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.

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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

Yours,

John

Answer 1

【答案】I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice. Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic. Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony. Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.

If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.

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【解析】本文屬于話題作文，利用色彩療法，給張濤提些建議。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如firstly, secondly, finally, calm, peaceful, because, energetic, secondly, create, harmony以及perhaps。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。