Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容，以The changes to my hometown 為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹你家鄉(xiāng)的變化。題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

過去	河水很干凈，空氣很新鮮，到處都有綠樹和漂亮的花兒；但人們住在低矮的房子里；人們只能用自行車去鎮(zhèn)上，大多數(shù)人步行上學(xué)或上班。
現(xiàn)在	街道既干凈又寬闊；公交車和出租車很多，許多人有自己的車，一個新的火車站自2005年以來就投入使用了，所以人們外出非常方便；大部分人都搬進了新的公寓，過著現(xiàn)代化的生活。但是樹更少了，環(huán)境也沒有以前好了。
將來	希望我的家鄉(xiāng)在將來……

The changes to my hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. ______________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

The changes to my hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.

In the past, the water was clear and the air was fresh. There were green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. It was a wonderful place to live. However, people lived in small and old houses. People could only use bicycles to the town. Most people had to go to school or work on foot.

Things have changed a lot. The streets are clean and wide. Many buses and taxis pass there. A lot of people have their own cars. A new railway station has been in service since 2005 so it is easy for people to go out. Most people have moved into new flats. They are living a modern life. The changes have brought many advantages and they have also caused many problems for people. There are fewer trees and the environment is not as good as before.

I hope my home town will be more and more beautiful in the future and people will live a better life.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達，寫作的話題為我家鄉(xiāng)的改變，具體內(nèi)容包括故去和現(xiàn)在人們在交通方式，環(huán)境，生活條件等方面的變化，以及個人對于家鄉(xiāng)未來的期望，在寫作時應(yīng)注意符合題意，同時應(yīng)注意使用多種不同時態(tài)的結(jié)構(gòu)，同時應(yīng)注意寫作時語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。

寫作亮點： 這篇短文要點敘述全，幾乎沒有語言錯誤，句式變化靈活。語言豐富。同時使用一些固定句式和短語，如： Great changes have taken place, in the past,as ...as等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié), 牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。