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15．三年的初中生活讓你收獲滿滿．校英語報邀你寫一管短文，給即將升入九年級的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹或
他們的父母提一些建議．請你結(jié)合自己的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷選擇其中一個對象，闡述你的觀點．

Advice for students	Advice for parents
keep healthy join clubs develop your study skills …	encourage．…more not compare…with allow…to make decisions …

注意：（1）短文必須包括你所選擇一方的所有要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
（3）詞數(shù)：80-100；
（4）短文首句僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)．
短文首句；How time flies!NowHowtimeflies!Now I'm graduating from our school．At the moment，I would like to share my experience of school life with you．【高分句型一】Here is some advice for studentsofGrade 9．（引出話題）
It is not enough to just study hard．【高分句型二】There are many good ways to improve our study．Different subjects need different ways．But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class，and review them after class．Another thing is asking questions during or after class．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes，try to learn from mistakes．（學(xué)習(xí)技巧）
You should alsoexercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you．（保持身體健康）
Everyone has hobbies．But sometimes these can get in the way of our schoolwork．So I think study must co me first．But youcan join some useful clubs，such as English club、basketball club、chess club and so on．（興趣與愛好）
I hope it can be helpful to you．Wish you success!（祝愿）（you your children）are students of Grade9．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I would like to share my experience of school life with you．我想和你分享我的學(xué)校生活經(jīng)歷．
would like to do sth表示想做某事．
【高分句型二】
It is not enough to just study hard．僅僅努力學(xué)習(xí)是不夠的．
It is not enough to do sth做某事是不夠的，it作形式主語，真正的主語是to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語．

解答 How time flies!Now I'm graduating from our school．At the moment，I would like to share my experience of school life with you．【高分句型一】Here is some advice for students of Grade 9．（引出話題）
It is not enough to just study hard．【高分句型二】There are many good ways to improve our study．Different subjects need different ways．But one thing in common is taking notes carefully in class，and review them after class．Another thing is asking questions during or after class．Besides，don't be afraid of making mistakes，try to learn from mistakes．（學(xué)習(xí)技巧）
You should also exercise more and keep healthy because it is the most important thing for you．（保持身體健康）
Everyone has hobbies．But sometimes these can get in the way of our schoolwork．So I think study must co me first．But you can join some useful clubs，such as English club、basketball club、chess club and so on．（興趣與愛好）
I hope it can be helpful to you．Wish you success!（祝愿）

點評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢，考生在平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯