Question

16．假設(shè)你們學(xué)校在澳大利亞的友好學(xué)校的師生想要了解你校學(xué)生的興趣和愛好，請(qǐng)你寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，介紹一下你的興趣和愛好及其意義．
注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地區(qū)、學(xué)校及姓名．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于自己的興趣和愛好的作文．內(nèi)容是開放式的，這需要我們發(fā)揮自己的想象力、創(chuàng)造力和思維力，把這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整．首先我們要介紹一下自己的大體情況，比如說姓名、年齡、城市、學(xué)校、年級(jí)等，然后再介紹自己的興趣和愛好以及意義．我們可以將本作文分為兩部分，第一部分為作者簡介，第二部分為興趣愛好，第三部分為愛好的意義．
重要的短語和句型：
collect stamps 收集郵票
exchange sth with sb 跟…交換…
help sb （to）do sth幫…做…
cut off 剪下
It helps me learn different cultures，including history and international knowledge．
它幫我了解不同的文化，包括歷史和國際知識(shí)．
It's also a good way of saving money，because the stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by．
這也是省錢的一種方式，因?yàn)猷]票會(huì)隨著時(shí)間的流逝而升值．

解答 參考答案
  My name is Jim．I am fourteenn years old．I am in Grade 8 Class 5．I am a student of Beijing Number 5 Middle School．I have a hobby．＜簡單介紹自己＞My hobby is collecting stamps．I have been collecting stamps for 10 years．Usually I collect stamps in three ways．When I get letters，I cut the stamps off the envelopes．What's more，every year I go to the post offices to buy a set of new stamps and I also go to the stamp market to buy some old stamps and foreign stamps．Finally，I have lots of friends who have the same hobby as I，so I sometimes exchange my stamps with them．＜介紹興趣愛好＞I think my hobby is very interesting and fun．First，it helps me learn different cultures，including history and international knowledge．Second，I can enjoy the beauty of art．Third，by exchanging stamps，I have made more friends．Fourth，it's also a good way of saving money，because the stamps will be more valuable as the time passes by．I think hobbies can make our life more colorful．What about your hobbies？＜意義/感想＞

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫命題作文時(shí)，我們最好需要列一列提綱，然后再通過提綱進(jìn)行寫作就不會(huì)造成作文的離題或者偏題．但要注意，文章必須要覆蓋整個(gè)要點(diǎn)，行文間要注意簡化，不要拖沓冗長，最好能夠?qū)懚痰暮唵尉洌�這樣比較能夠得分．同時(shí)注意，寫作文是要使用一定的連接詞，比如：first，second，what's more，finally等等．再者，在作文完成的時(shí)候要注意檢查，修改，以避免遺漏．如果有條件的話，最好能夠先打個(gè)草稿，再抄到答題紙上，這樣更容易分高分．最后，注意要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫、流暢，方能成就一篇好的作文．