Question

【題目】假定你是Paul,下面是你的家庭成員信息。請根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，介紹你的家庭成員的情況。詞數(shù)不少于50。

grandfather	grandmother	father	mother	sister
John	Gina	Jack	Helen	Lisa

Answer 1

【答案】This is a photo of my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister and me. My grandfather is John, and Gina is my grandmother. This is my father. His name is Jack. Oh, that is my mother. She is Helen. Who is this girl? She is my sister, and her name is Lisa. This is me. My name is Paul. These are my family.

【解析】試題分析：本次作文為記敘文。用英文寫一篇家庭成員的主要信息。要求：1．以表格中的信息為主要內(nèi)容；2．詞數(shù)不少于50字。要注意時態(tài)運(yùn)用，表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤。

【寫作亮點(diǎn)】：本篇習(xí)作成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，表達(dá)順暢，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，要點(diǎn)全面，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，是一篇優(yōu)秀的習(xí)作。