Question

19．假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游（outing）．請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息寫一篇題為"A pleasant outing"的英語短文，參加某英文報紙的征文比賽．

A pleasant outing
時間	上周末
參加者	你和…
地點	北山公園（the North Hill Park）
活動	騎自行車、爬山、野餐、做游戲…
感受	…

要求：
（1）不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當增減內(nèi)容；
（2）短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、人名和校名；
（3）詞數(shù)：80～110個．
參考詞匯：go for an outing；  climb the hill；  have a picnic
A pleasant outing
Last weekend，I went for an outing with my classmates．At 7：30 in the morning，we met at our school gate．We went to the North Hill Park by bike．On the way，we were so excited that we sang loudly．When we arrived there，we started to climb the hill at once．We had a picnic on the top of the hill．After that，we walked down the path and had a rest．Later，some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily．We didn't go back until 4：00 p．m..We were tired but very happy．
What a pleasant outing it was!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"A pleasant outing"為題說說上周末的一次郊游．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1時間 上周末
2參加者 你和…
3地點 北山公園（the North Hill Park）
4活動 騎自行車、爬山、野餐、做游戲…
5感受

常用到的重點短語：
by+交通工具 乘坐…
on the way 在路上
so…that如此…以至于
at once立刻
have a rest休息
not…until…直到…才…

高分句型：
1．①On the way，we were ②so excited that we sang loudly．
①on the way 在路上
②so…that如此…以至于，中間加上形容詞或副詞，這里是形容詞excited，that引導(dǎo)的是結(jié)果狀語從句．
2．What a pleasant outing it was!
感嘆句的運用．what+a/an+形容詞+名詞單數(shù)+主語+謂語！

解答 A pleasant outing
Last weekend，I went for an outing with my classmates．（時間和參加者）At 7：30 in the morning，we met at our school gate．We went to the North Hill Park by bike．（地點）On the way，we were so excited that we sang loudly．（高分句型）When we arrived there，we started to climb the hill at once．We had a picnic on the top of the hill．After that，we walked down the path and had a rest．Later，some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily．（活動）We didn't go back until 4：00 p．m..We were tired but very happy．
What a pleasant outing it was!（感受）（高分句型）

點評 本題是一篇圖表作文，圖表作為書面表達的一種信息提示方式，比提綱作文線索顯得更簡潔明了，寫作時也容易區(qū)分表達，本題在寫作時，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當使用邏輯詞語，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．