Question

【題目】作文 （本大題共10分）

請根據提示內容，以“My ideal school”為題，描述你理想中的學校。詞數80左右。

內容要點如下：

1. 早上9點上學，所以不必很早起床；

2. 每天僅有一小時的作業(yè)，有很多時間從事課外活動；

3. 學校餐廳干凈明亮，我們一起吃飯、聊天很開心；

4. 圖書館里藏書萬冊，我們喜歡課后討論各種書籍；

5. 每學期學校舉行一次外出游玩，我認為......(適當發(fā)揮1句)

My ideal school

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Answer 1

【答案】

My ideal school

We go to school at nine in the morning. So we don’t need to get up early. We have only an hour of homework, and we have much time for after-school activities. Our school dining hall is clean and bright. We have fun having lunch and chatting together there. There is a library in our school. It has about ten thousand books in it and we like discussing all kinds of books after class. We have a school trip every term. I think our school life is colourful.

【解析】

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