Question

3．旅行是讓生活更加精彩的調(diào)味品．某英文報正以"An enjoyable trip"為題征文，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，描述一次愉快的旅行，向該報刊投稿．
提示：1．Where did you travel？
 2．How was the weather？
 3．What did you do there？
 4．What food did you eat？
注意：1．詞數(shù)80以上；短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何信息，否則不予評分．
An enjoyable trip
Last spring，                                                  

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park我們在一家著名的主題公園玩得很開心．
enjoy oneself玩得開心
【高分句型二】
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there我去三亞的旅行似乎短暫疲勞，但是我們真的在那里玩得開心，
but表示轉(zhuǎn)折．

解答 A  trip
Last month，I went on a trip to Sanya，Hainan．（時間地點）I went there by train with my parents．（人物和交通方式）It took about 12 hours to get there．It is sunny there（天氣）
On the first day，we walked around the city．It was quite a beautiful place．The sky was blue and the air was nice and clean．We all enjoyed the beautiful views．People there were friendly too．
On the second day，we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums．Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous theme park．【高分句型一】
We did some shopping on the third day．Mum and I bought a lot of things．（經(jīng)過）After that，we had a big dinner in a seafood restaurant．（食物）
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring，but we really had a fantastic time there【高分句型二】．（感覺）

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