Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。（15分）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，以 Healthy Eating 為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)健康飲食的看法。70詞左右。

提示：1. 很多學(xué)生喜歡吃漢堡包、炸薯?xiàng)l、炸雞等快餐（fast food）；

2. 快餐對(duì)身體健康有害，經(jīng)常吃快餐容易變肥胖（overweight）；

3. 良好的飲食和健康的飲食習(xí)慣很重要。

提示詞：hamburger, French fries, fried chicken, diet, eating habit

Healthy Eating

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Answer 1

【答案】

Healthy Eating

Many students like eating fast food, such as hamburgers, French fries and fried chicken. They think fast food tastes very delicious. But they don’t know it is bad for their health. If someone eats fast food for a long time, he will become overweight easily. I think it’s very important for us to have a good diet and a healthy eating habit. We should eat different kinds of foods. We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. In short, we should eat not only our favorite food but also other healthy food.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是圍繞健康飲食展開(kāi)敘述，首先應(yīng)該說(shuō)明健康飲食的重要性，然后，分別敘述如何才能保持健康。最后，要發(fā)出倡議，號(hào)召大家保持健康飲食。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文屬于半開(kāi)放性作文，同時(shí)文章和考生的實(shí)際結(jié)合緊密，考生有話可說(shuō)，有理可寫(xiě)。文章的要點(diǎn)并不清楚，給考生留下的發(fā)揮空間較大，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以利用較復(fù)雜的句式，也可以使用高級(jí)詞匯和適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞讓文章更流暢。這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如But they don’t know it is bad for their health； We’d better eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. 等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。