Question

8．緊張的初中學習生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來一個輕松的暑假．請根據(jù)下面方框內(nèi)的提示寫一篇短文，談談你的假期計劃．

暑  假  計  劃

1、好好休息，學會放松

2、讀書，因為讀書既有趣又能學到很多知識

3、陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務

4、參加社會活動，了解社會

5、…

注意：
1、詞數(shù)80～100；
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地址和姓名；
3、方框內(nèi)容不必逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮．
參考詞匯：知識 knowledge，社會活動 social activities．The summer holiday is coming．I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself．I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge．I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework．I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society．If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談談你的假期計劃．時態(tài)主要為一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1、好好休息，學會放松
2、讀書，因為讀書既有趣又能學到很多知識
3、陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務
4、參加社會活動，了解社會
5．其他
常用到的重點短語：
be going to 打算做某事
learn to do sth 學會做某事
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事
try to do sth 盡力做某事
chat with sb 與某人聊天
take part in 參加

【高分句型】
1．I will read more useful books①because reading more books is ②not only interesting but also can③make me learn more knowledge．
①because 引導的原因狀語從句．動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…連接兩個對等的成分．
③make sb do sth 讓某人做某事

2．I①am going to②take part in the social activities③so that I can know more about the society．
①be going to 打算做某事
②take part in 參加
③so that引導的目的狀語從句．
3．If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．
if possible是省略句，完整表達是if it is possible．

解答 The summer holiday is coming．I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself．（好好休息，學會放松）I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge．（讀書，因為讀書既有趣又能學到很多知識）【高分句型】I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework．（陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務）I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society．（參加社會活動，了解社會）【高分句型】If possible，I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo．（去上海看世博）【高分句型】I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday．

點評 本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達，主要介紹我的假期計劃，內(nèi)容包括假期的放松方式，學習內(nèi)容，幫助母親和參加社會活動等，在寫作時應注意主要使用將來時，同時應注意主要使用第一人稱，同時應注意符合題意和語言的準確性．