Question

社團(tuán)（clubs）在學(xué)習(xí)生活中扮演著重要的角色。社團(tuán)活動(dòng)中，同學(xué)們可以相互學(xué)習(xí)，共同提高。假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請根據(jù)表中的提示用英語為學(xué)校的社團(tuán)寫一封倡議書，簡述參加社團(tuán)的意義，說明社團(tuán)活動(dòng)組織情況，并給參加社團(tuán)的同學(xué)提出建議。

參加社團(tuán)的意義	１.　獲得知識經(jīng)驗(yàn)（或自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ２.　提高交際能力（或自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ３.　培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神（或自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ４.　……（自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）
社團(tuán)組織的情況	１.　多種社團(tuán)，自主選擇（自擬２個(gè)社團(tuán)名稱） ２.　時(shí)間：每周二下午四點(diǎn) 地點(diǎn)：教學(xué)樓二樓、三樓的教室
參加社團(tuán)的建議	１.　參加一兩個(gè)社團(tuán)（或自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ２.　積極參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)（或自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ３.　合理籌劃安排時(shí)間（或自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容） ４.　……（自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）

注意：
1．表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。
2．詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。
3．表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。
Dear fellow students,
Clubs play an important role in our school life. In club activities, we can learn a lot from the students with the same hobbies and improve ourselves. ________________________________
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Sam

Answer 1

Dear fellow students
Clubs play an important role in our school life. In club activities, we can learn a lot from the students with the same hobbies and improve ourselves. If you join the clubs, you can learn a lot of knowledge and get rich experience. It’s good for you to learn to communicate with others. Clubs can offer you chances to have team spirit. Also, you can make a lot of friends and meet all kinds of people.
We have many kinds of clubs for you to choose, such as Science Club, Reading Club, Drawing Club. Club activities will begin at 4.00 every Tuesday afternoon, on the second and third floors of the teaching building.
Finally I’d like to offer you some advice. I think you’d better choose one or two clubs because you don’t have much time for too many activities. Also, you ought to take an active part in the activities on time. Besides, it’s necessary for you to plan your time carefully. I hope you can achieve a balance between study and club activities and feel happy in the clubs.
Sam

試題分析：本文的寫作首先開門見山進(jìn)行說明加入社團(tuán)的好處如獲得知識經(jīng)驗(yàn)you can learn a lot of knowledge and get rich experience.提高交際能力learn to communicate with others培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神have team spirit.然后對社團(tuán)組織的情況進(jìn)行說明如名詞Science Club, Reading Club時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)情況進(jìn)行介紹；最后提出自己的對于參加社團(tuán)的建議參加一兩個(gè)社團(tuán)choose one or two clubs　積極參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)take an active part in the activities on time.合理籌劃安排時(shí)間plan your time carefully.并表達(dá)自己的祝福I hope you can achieve a balance between study and club activities and feel happy in the clubs.
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