Question

1．假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡相應(yīng)位置用英語(yǔ)給你的美國(guó)筆友Jim寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，告訴他以下事情：
1．感謝他給你寄來(lái)的那些書(shū)．你非常喜歡它們，每晚睡前都會(huì)讀幾頁(yè)．請(qǐng)他下次來(lái)信時(shí)給你介紹一些美國(guó)的節(jié)日．
2．非常盼望與他面對(duì)面交談，所以希望他明年夏天能來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)．你愿意作他的導(dǎo)游．你們可以一起參觀一些有趣的地方．
3．順便問(wèn)一下，這些天他是否在電視中看世界杯．
注意事項(xiàng)：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)涉及考生真實(shí)信息的人名、地名等內(nèi)容．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
3．詞數(shù)70-110，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
郵寄：mail/post v．
導(dǎo)游：guide n．
世界杯：the World Cup
Dear Jim，
How is it going？Thank you for mailing the books to me．I like them so much that I read some pages
every day before going to bed．When you write to me next time，could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day？
I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer．On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both interested in．On the other
hand，I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places．
By the way，are you watching the World Cup on TV these days？
Looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇提綱作文，因?yàn)槭菚?shū)信的體裁，所以時(shí)態(tài)要根據(jù)實(shí)際情況注意變換，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．感謝他給你寄來(lái)的那些書(shū)，請(qǐng)他下次來(lái)信時(shí)給你介紹一些美國(guó)的節(jié)日．2．非常盼望與他面對(duì)面交談，所以希望他明年夏天能來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)．3．順便問(wèn)一下，這些天他是否在電視中看世界杯．

解答 Dear Jim
     How is it going？
     Thank you for mailing the books to me．I like them so much that I read some pages every day before going to bed．When you write to me next time，could you tell me something about American festivals such as Thanksgiving Day？
     I do hope that you can come and visit my hometown next summer．On the one hand we can talk face to face and discuss some problems that we are both interested in．On the other
hand，I will be very happy to act as your guide and show you around some nice places．
     By the way，are you watching the World Cup on TV these days？
    Looking forward to hearing from you．
     Yours
     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文，要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．