Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

58. 再讀本試卷閱讀理解A篇材料, 依據(jù)故事情節(jié), 下午Mr Chen會(huì)與David談話。請(qǐng)以“A Talk with David”為題續(xù)寫(xiě)故事, 詞數(shù)100左右。

要求: 1. 仿照閱讀理解A篇材料寫(xiě)作手法, 采用敘述、對(duì)話或二者結(jié)合的形式續(xù)寫(xiě)故事;

2. 內(nèi)容要涉及A篇中的信件、缺課等相關(guān)信息以及Mr Chen的建議;

3. 觀點(diǎn)正確、條理清晰、表達(dá)流暢;

4. 題目與開(kāi)頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

A Talk with David

At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.

Answer 1

【答案】At the end of the day. Mr Chen spoke to David about his absence.

“Did your mother really write that letter? ”Mr Chen asked.

David's face turned red and then pale. “No, sir, she didn't. I wrote it. I'm very sorry, sir.”

"It's the P. E, isn't it? "said Mr Chen. "You are avoiding something, aren't you? "

“Yes, sir, ”David admitted.

“And what have you been doing these Thursdays? ”Mr Chen asked.

"I have been studying in the library, "replied David eagerly.

“Oh, well, at least you didn't run off to the cinema, "said Mr Chen. "But you were very silly.

What will happen if I report this to your parents and the Principal. "

David felt ashamed of himself.

“But I won't tell anybody-if you promise me two things, "Mr Chen added.

David looked up hopefully.

"I want you to promise never to do anything like this again. If you have any problems, discuss them with your parents or with me first. Mr Long knows all about this. He has kindly agreed to help you to overcome your fear of heights. Talk to him after school on Monday. OK? ”

“Yes, sir, ”said David with a sigh of relief. “Thank you very much. "

David felt happier as he went home.

【解析】

本文屬于材料作文，根據(jù)A篇閱讀的故事情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如turn red, at least, run off, look up, promise to do, help sb to do, fear of height以及with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。