Question

上個(gè)星期天晚上，你和家人一起去看京劇。談?wù)勅ブ�前你的心情及看過(guò)之后的體會(huì)。詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。
提示詞語(yǔ)：look forward to ... , national opera, express Chinese culture, famous stories, facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting, have a nice evening ... 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera ...
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Last Sunday evening, my father, mother and I went to see Beijing Opera. I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It expresses Chinese culture. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well. When we got to the theater, I found there were so many people. They looked very excited, too. Then I had a nice evening there. After seeing it, I think it is really wonderful.

試題分析：本文是話題作文，給出的材料很少，只提到了看京劇，需要學(xué)生自己組織材料，在動(dòng)筆前先列出作文提綱，一定要注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)出看京劇前后的感受，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要用一些過(guò)渡詞或過(guò)渡句子來(lái)使文章銜接自然。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文用了一些短語(yǔ)或句式，如：I was looking forward to seeing it, because I heard that it was our national opera with a history of 200 years. It’s full of famous stories, beautiful facial paintings, wonderful gestures and fighting. On the night before we started, I felt so excited that I couldn’t sleep well.等，句中用了一些連詞如：because，when，so…that等。提醒學(xué)生平時(shí)注意積累一些短語(yǔ)或句式。