Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

上周你校成功舉辦(hold)了第十屆藝術(shù)節(jié)（the tenth Art Festival）.晚會(huì)上同學(xué)們紛紛展示了自己的才藝。你的好友Bill獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，介紹一下晚會(huì)的情況。80詞左右。(hold的過去式held)

who	what
Bill	play a beautiful violin piece
Sonia	tell a funny story
Li Xin	dance without music
Ben	sing an English song

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last week our school hosted the Tenth Festival successfully. On the evening party ,the students showed their talent.Bill played a beautiful violin piece.We all liked it.Sonia told a funny story.It was very interesting.And it made us laugh.Li Xin danced without music.Ben sang an English song.It was beautiful.At last,Ben won the first prize.We were very proud of him.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹了晚會(huì)上的情況，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Li Xin danced without music.Ben sang an English song.It was beautiful.At last,Ben won the first prize.We were very proud of him.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。