Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是杰克，學(xué)校圖書館需要一個圖書管理員（librarian）。請你寫一封正式的推薦信給館長Mr. Smith，介紹你的同學(xué)Peter當(dāng)圖書管理員。詞數(shù)： 80左右，內(nèi)容提示：

1.Peter懂禮貌和謙虛，每當(dāng)他遇見老師和同學(xué)，都能禮貌地打招呼，他能交許多朋友。

2.他自信和聰明。勤奮而樂于助人，如果他盡力，他能作好任何事情。

3.他很有耐心，有條理，他能仔細(xì)計劃好每件事。

Dear Mr. Smith，

I’m writing to recommend Peter as a librarian of our school library.

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I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely，

Jack

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Smith，

I’m writing to recommend Peter as a librarian of our school library.

Peter is very polite and humble. Whenever he meets the teachers and classmates， he will say hello to them politely .Because he is so friendly that he can make many friends.

He is confident and smart.. He is hard-working and willing to help others. If he tries his best， he can do anything well.

He is patient， methodical and he can plan everything carefully. All in all ， I think he is the right student to be a librarian of our school library.

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely，

Jack

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要寫的材料比較具體：結(jié)束彼得三方面的情況，首先是和同學(xué)老師之間的關(guān)系結(jié)束，聰明仔細(xì)能盡力做好事情，有耐心能仔細(xì)計劃每一件事情。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時，在寫作時注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。在短文中運用了比較高級的復(fù)合句：If he tries his best， he can do anything well.；Because he is so friendly that he can make many friends.等。