Question

【題目】假定你是張華，你在外地學(xué)習(xí)的好朋友王偉發(fā)電子郵件向你請教如何學(xué)好英語。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他回封電子郵件。

內(nèi)容包括：

（1）看英語電影、聽英語歌曲，猜測生詞意思。

（2）與外教交談。

（3）把單詞寫在紙條上，利用紙條記憶單詞。

注意：

（1）詞數(shù)：80左右；

（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Wang Wei，

I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.

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These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.

Yours，

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang Wei，

I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.

Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times，and guess the meaning of the new words.

Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You’d better start it with greetings or a question. Also，smile before you speak and do not feel shy. Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them，and try to use them.

These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.

Yours，

Zhang Hua

【解析】【亮點(diǎn)說明】

這篇習(xí)作結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練、內(nèi)容豐富。文中be great ways to do sth.,have a conversation with, had better, start it with sth., on pieces of paper ,place sth. in your room, try to do, be useful to sb.等短語的恰當(dāng)使用，使短文表意豐富；而Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English!/ Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way.等動(dòng)名詞作主語的句子和and并列句、時(shí)間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。