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【題目】 書面表達(dá)

為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時(shí)舉止更加文雅，你校學(xué)生會(huì)正在舉辦以 “How to behave well?”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文。(詞數(shù)90左右)

短文要點(diǎn)如下：

1.在公共場(chǎng)所排隊(duì)等候，插隊(duì)是不禮貌的.

2.別人擋了道，不推不擠，說對(duì)不起.

3.公共場(chǎng)所不大聲叫嚷.

4.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗.

5．請(qǐng)你就此話題再補(bǔ)充個(gè)人看法.

How to Behave Well

Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How to Behave Well

Behave well is the secret of getting on well with others. In public, we should always queue, it’s rude to push in before others. If they are in your way, we shouldn’t touch or push past them instead, we’d better say“Excuse me”,and be polite enough to wait till they move. Keep our voice down in public. Don’t shout or laugh loudly. Remember one saying goes,“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”In my opinion, we should try to be honest and always ready to help others.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹與人交往時(shí)如何舉止更加文雅。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we should always...；we shouldn’t ...；we’d better...及Try to be ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意列出題目要求的要點(diǎn)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了舉止優(yōu)雅的重要性，接下來介紹如何舉止優(yōu)雅，最后說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。此處用了getting on well with，enough to，Keep our voice down及try to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。