Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（共15分）

很多人認(rèn)為當(dāng)今的中學(xué)生有自己鮮明的特點(diǎn)。他們多才多藝，擅長(zhǎng)琴棋書畫；同時(shí)也常常以自我為中心，很少為他人著想。作為中學(xué)生，你認(rèn)為自己最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是什么？（請(qǐng)舉例說明），缺點(diǎn)是什么？（請(qǐng)舉例說明）。你應(yīng)該如何揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，做最好的自己？

要求：1．詞數(shù)80左右。 文章標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．短文中不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。

3．注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。

It’s said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points．

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Answer 1

【答案】

It is said that the middle school students today have their own strong points and weak points. They are good at many things, for example, music, drawing, sports. But they are also thought to be selfish. They often think about themselves.

I have many advantages and I think the biggest is that I am willing to help others. I remember once I played basketball with my friends. Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.

Of course I have many disadvantages. I don’t work hard at my studies and always play computer games. So I am not good at my subjects. My teacher said to me I was clever, but I didn’t put my heart into it. I know my disadvantages. So I want correct them. I think I can overcome my shortcomings. I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要描述當(dāng)代中學(xué)生的特點(diǎn)和舉例說明作為中學(xué)生自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，因此一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)（當(dāng)代中學(xué)生的特點(diǎn)）和一般過去時(shí)（舉例說明）運(yùn)用較多。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。當(dāng)然，寫作時(shí)尤要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的合理，表述的條理性和準(zhǔn)確性。

溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫。尤為突出之處在短語(yǔ)和句子的巧妙運(yùn)用，如It is said that；be good at；be willing to；Suddenly, one of my friends fell and was hurt. I sent him to hospital at once.；I will work hard at my lessons and try to make progress.等這些短語(yǔ)和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。