【題目】學(xué)校于今年暑假舉辦夏令營活動以后,向全校發(fā)起了“愉快夏令營”的征文比賽,請你根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇征文稿。短文開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

要求:1. 將所給信息全部體現(xiàn)在文章中,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2. 條理清楚,意思連貫,語句通順,標(biāo)點正確,書寫規(guī)范、清晰;

3. 60詞。

Weather: sunny

Activities: ●Morning: go swimming, play in the water...

●Afternoon: play beach volleyball, relax on the beach...

●Night: have a party, play games...

Feelings: tired, happy...

Last Sunday I went to summer camp with my classmates.

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【答案】Last Sunday I went to summer camp with my classmates. It was sunny and warm. We went to the beach by bus.

In the morning, we went swimming and played in the water. In the afternoon, we played beach volleyball and relaxed ourselves on the beach. At night, we had a big party. We sang, danced and played games.

My summer camp was really interesting. I was tired but happy.

【解析】

這篇作文要求根據(jù)題目要求記敘一次夏令營的活動。題目中給出了大概的提綱,是用關(guān)鍵詞的形式展示出來的。學(xué)生們需要根據(jù)這些提示,自己發(fā)揮想象力,組織語言,充實內(nèi)容,串聯(lián)成文,這是寫作中的一個難點。其次需要注意文章的表達(dá),英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,因此不能逐詞翻譯提綱,而應(yīng)從文章的整體考慮,選擇使用適當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)、人稱,并注意變化動詞、名詞的形式。通過分析可知,這篇短文記敘的是過去發(fā)生的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài),所以動詞應(yīng)變?yōu)檫^去式形式,尤其是要注意不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。句式表達(dá)應(yīng)以簡單句為主,為提升文章檔次,穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句,并使用一些高級句型和詞匯,如非謂語動詞、固定句型等。同時語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使上下文意思連貫。

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