Question

【題目】微笑是人類(lèi)最美的語(yǔ)言。某英文報(bào)以“Smiles”為題,舉辦中學(xué)生征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表信息,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事給予你的啟示。

提示：1.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息,條理清楚,行文連貫；2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名； 3.詞

數(shù)不少于80。

Answer 1

【答案】Smiles

A smile is the most beautiful language of human beings. A smile is like the sunshine in winter. It warms our hearts and helps us get on well with each other. A person who often smiles usually brings good luck. What’s more, smile can give us confidence.

When I was young, I was very shy. I was afraid to speak in public. One day, I needed to give a speech in my English class. I was so frighten that I did badly at the beginning. But when I saw a big smile on my teacher’s face, I got more and more confident. Finally, I made it.

Smiles are very helpful in our daily lives. We should often keep smiles on our faces, If we are happy, we smile. If we meet difficulties, we should smile, too. Let’s smile to life.

【解析】

這是一篇圖表作文。要求以“Smiles”為題，根據(jù)圖表提示信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故亊以及故事給予你的啟示。根據(jù)所給的提示材料可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要用第一人稱(chēng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。