Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

介紹你的好朋友Tim, 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 他來(lái)自上海，又高又強(qiáng)壯；

2. 住的離學(xué)校很遠(yuǎn), 乘公交半小時(shí)到校, 但從不遲到;

3. 空閑時(shí)間喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、和朋友們聊天;

4. 酷愛(ài)閱讀, 每周從圖書(shū)館借書(shū)一次;

5. 讀書(shū)能幫助他對(duì)世界了解很多.

注意：

1．介紹須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；

2．詞數(shù)70個(gè)左右，短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Tim is my good friend. _____________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Tim is my good friend. He is from Shanghai. He is tall and strong. He lives far away from school. It takes him half an hour to go to school by bus. But he is never late for school. He likes listening to music and chatting with his friends in his free time. He loves reading very much. He borrows books from the library once a week. Reading books can help him learn a lot about the world. (73words)

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。