Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

你班Carl同學(xué)最近遇到了一些問(wèn)題，希望得到一些建議和幫助。請(qǐng)你以Mr. Friend的身份給Carl寫封信，針對(duì)Carl的所有問(wèn)題提出一些有益的建議。

注意事項(xiàng)：1.不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和本人真實(shí)姓名。

2．下列表格中的內(nèi)容不得遺漏。

3．字?jǐn)?shù)：90左右。

Carl

A Grade 9 student

Be crazy about basketball

Have lots of homework

Stay up late

Low marks in exams

Feel stressed

Dear Carl,

I've learned about your problems. I hope I can help you._____________________

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_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Carl,

I've learned about your problems. I hope I can help you. You are a Grade student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give up it . You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school.

Best wishes,

Mr. Friend

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。