Question

【題目】常言道:“早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。”(Early bird catches the worm. )早起有助于我們的健康、生活、學(xué)習(xí)……請(qǐng)以“The Advantages of Getting up Early”為題, 并結(jié)合自己或他人的實(shí)際, 寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要求:1.條理清楚，意思連貫，書寫工整。

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】

The Advantages of Getting up Early

Some people get up very late in the morning .I think this is not a good habit. As a student, we should get up early in the morning.

There are many advantages of getting up early. First, the air in the morning is very fresh. Getting up early is good for our health. Second, if we get up early, we may have enough time to eat breakfast, exercise and prepare to go to school. Last but not least, getting up early is good for reading. As we all know, we can easily remember when reading books in the morning. So please get up early.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以The Advantages of Getting up Early（早起的好處）為題寫一篇短文。首先要明確地提出觀點(diǎn)：早起有好處；然后可以從早起有助于我們的健康、生活、學(xué)習(xí)等等方面寫作早起的好處。最后可以倡導(dǎo)人們?cè)缙鸾Y(jié)尾。短文要注意條理清楚，意思連貫。短文用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文第一段，點(diǎn)明論點(diǎn)：睡懶覺(jué)是壞習(xí)慣，學(xué)生應(yīng)該早起，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山；第二段先總體說(shuō)早起用許多好處，再由first, second, last等引出早起的各種益處，條理清晰，層次分明。從健康、生活、學(xué)習(xí)幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行介紹，具體生動(dòng)。最后以一句話結(jié)尾：因此，請(qǐng)?jiān)缙�！語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)捷精煉，首尾呼應(yīng)，主題鮮明突出。