Question

【題目】近年來(lái),越來(lái)越 多的中學(xué)生選擇出國(guó)留學(xué),對(duì)此有人費(fèi)同也有人反對(duì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示寫篇短文，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

要求:

1. 內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)句流暢;不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2. 80~100詞(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Now more and more middle school students choose to study abroad. As for me,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Now more and more middle school students choose to study abroad. As for me, I don't think it's a good idea.

Firstly, it's said that many Chinese students spend most of their time with other Chinese students when they study abroad. There are few chances for them to improve their English. Secondly, it costs much for a student to study abroad. Lastly, many people think children can be more independent when they live abroad alone. In my opinion, every child can become independent if they can get used to doing alone .Living abroad is not the only way to become independent.

So I don’t think it’s good for middle school students to study abroad.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如more and more，study abroad，as for me，spend time with sth.，most of，improve their English，live abroad alone，in my opinion，get used to，be able to，all over the world，by high-speed train，in order to等。同時(shí)it's said that many Chinese students spend most of their time with other Chinese students when they study abroad. / many people think children can be more independent when they live abroad alone./ So I don’t think it’s good for middle school students to study abroad.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。