Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分10分）
假如你是Tom，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的文章。

Things that you like		kind		reason
color	blue		Like sea
music	Classical music		quiet
sport	basketball		exciting
movie	Action movie		interesting

 

Answer 1

My name is Tom. I would like to tell something about me. My favorite color is blue, because I like the sea. When I am tired, I often relax on the beach. When I am free, I like listening to the music. My favorite music is classical music, because I think it is quiet. As for sports, I like basketball best. I think basketball is exciting. I play basketball every day, so I am tall and strong. My favorite movie is action movie. I think action movie is interesting. I often go to the movies with my friends on weekends. By the way, what’s your hobby?

解析試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)，是根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇文章。題目已經(jīng)給出名字Tom，故應(yīng)該注意表示時(shí)的稱謂，人稱應(yīng)該用第一人稱書(shū)寫(xiě)I。題目要求包括喜歡的顏色、音樂(lè)、運(yùn)動(dòng)、電影已經(jīng)原因，故應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意一些固定用法，如：I would like，my favourite，I like，because等。
考點(diǎn)：本題考查提綱式作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于自我介紹的書(shū)面表達(dá)，注意表述的全面性，要盡可能將提示內(nèi)容表達(dá)清晰。注意句子之間的銜接，可以利用一些連詞，如and，but等。