Question

  節(jié)約光榮，浪費(fèi)可恥。假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生，你周圍的人們有浪費(fèi)食物的現(xiàn)象，對(duì)此，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇發(fā)言稿，呼吁大家節(jié)約糧食。
內(nèi)容包括：1．食物很重要，并且來(lái)之不易，我們應(yīng)該節(jié)約糧食（food）。
2．列舉生活中存在的浪費(fèi)糧食的現(xiàn)象。
3．作為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，號(hào)召家人行動(dòng)起來(lái)，去餐館吃飯點(diǎn)餐，夠吃就行，每頓飯都應(yīng)該“光盤”。
4．號(hào)召大家加入到這個(gè)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。
寫作要求：1．條理清晰，意思連貫，詞句通順。
2．不能照抄原文，不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
3．詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。
Come and join us, clear your plate!
Boys and girls,
 
 
 
 
 
That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

One possible version:
Come and join us, clear your plate!
Boys and girls,
Good morning, everyone. I am Lily. I am in Class 28, Grade Nine. I study in No.12 Middle School. It’s my honor to give a speech in front of you.
Do you like food? What’s your favorite food? Do you know how the farmers plant rice and corn?
In our daily life, we can’t live without food. Food is very important, isn’t it? But I am sorry to see many people waste food. Some people throw away the rest food into the dustbin. Why don’t they plan to prepare suitable food. When you go to have dinner with your friends in the restaurant, have you ever ordered too much food?
My dear friends, we know many people in South Africa are lack of food. If there is bad weather, rice can’t grow. So we must stop wasting food. From now on, come and join “clear your plate” compaign. When we have dinner with our family in the restaurant, we never order too much food. If there is some food left, pack it home. Don’t put it off, take actions!
That’s all. Thank you!

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求呼吁大家節(jié)約糧食。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如It’s my honor to give a speech in front of you. I am sorry to see many people waste food When we have dinner with our family in the restaurant, we never order too much food. If there is some food left, pack it home.等。At In our daily life等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。