Question

2012年春節(jié)就要到了，（1月19日）你和同學(xué)到敬老院和那兒的老人度過了一個(gè)快樂的上午，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇80詞左右的日記，介紹一下你們那天上午活動(dòng)的情況。
日記的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1. 來回的時(shí)間及方式；
2. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：掃地，洗衣，娛樂……；
3. 活動(dòng)感受：很累但很愉快；要尊重和關(guān)心老人。
參考詞匯： old people’s home 敬老院  respect  vt．尊重
Thursday,January19th,2012                                      Cloudy                                              
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Answer 1

The Spring Festival is coming. It was seven o’clock in the morning. Four of my friends and I got together at the school gate and went to the nearest old people’s home called Wulin Old People’s Home to visit the old people there. It’s so near that we went there on foot. That is one of our winter vacation’s volunteer activities. Yesterday we went shopping to buy nice snacks like cakes and candies for the old people.
When we got there, we sent our gifts to them first. They looked so happy. After that, we cleaned their rooms and washed their clothes. Also, to make them happier and more relaxed, we acted for them, singing and dancing. Later we had a talk with them and got them so excited all the time. It took us the whole morning to be with them.  As teenagers, we should learn to care about others and respecting old people is our duty. We felt tired when we left, but I think it’s a special day.
    What a good day!

解析這篇作文是日記題材，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，要包括1. 來回的時(shí)間及方式；2. 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容， 3. 活動(dòng)感受：圍繞要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行描寫，也可以適當(dāng)增減，還要注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用，日記主要用過去時(shí) ，另外還要注意運(yùn)用一些復(fù)雜的句型，例如：It’s so near that we went there on foot.that引導(dǎo)的是結(jié)果狀語從句，to make them happier and more relaxed, we acted for them, singing and dancing.不定式做得是目的狀語，現(xiàn)在分詞做得是伴隨狀語。