Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

為深入開(kāi)展“解放思想，改進(jìn)作風(fēng)，奮發(fā)有為，創(chuàng)先爭(zhēng)優(yōu)”主題教育實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明班級(jí)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的內(nèi)容，以“A Meaningful Activity”為題，向報(bào)社投稿，介紹活動(dòng)有關(guān)的情況。

主題	告別陋習(xí)，握手文明
目的	根除亂扔、亂吐、亂畫、吸煙、喝酒等現(xiàn)象； 提倡穿校服、講禮貌。
內(nèi)容	舉辦圖片展，進(jìn)行先進(jìn)班級(jí)評(píng)比（環(huán)境和行為）等。

要求：1、必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù)：70 - 90；

3、參考詞匯：文明 civilization; 校園 campus; 告別陋習(xí)，握手文明 “Get rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”

A Meaningful Activity

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has now started the activity of "build civilized classes". The topic is “Get Rid of Bad Habits and Greet Civilization”.

We can still see some bad habits in our school. Some students throw rubbish everywhere or spit in public. Some even get into bad habits，such as smoking and drinking. We hope the students break away from these bad habits. We advise the students to wear their uniform and be polite to others. During the activity, we have held a picture show, a competition between classes for better environment and behavior, and so on.

We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹教育實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容。寫作中注意寫明活動(dòng)的主題、目的及內(nèi)容。注意不能遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，及人稱和固定詞組的用法。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】1. 上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。運(yùn)用所給提示詞，語(yǔ)言通俗易懂，有號(hào)召力。

2.句式簡(jiǎn)單，言簡(jiǎn)意賅。固定詞組in public./break away/ advise sb to do/ sth./ be polite to /and so on./賓語(yǔ)從句We hope the students break away from these bad habits./ We all hope that we’ll build each class into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place. 3.注意適當(dāng)使用連詞，smoking and drinking./ wear their uniform and be polite to others./ into a civilized one and our campus into a beautiful place.