Question

【題目】（福建省廈門市2015年中考）短文寫作。

假設(shè)你是思考，你的美國筆友Lucy來信想了解曹沖稱象的故事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)如下圖片及要點(diǎn)提示用英語寫一封80詞以上的回信給她。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1. 回信目的

2. 故事簡介

3. 故事給你的啟示

注意：1.信中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。

2. 信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

3. 參考詞匯：scale n.稱; calculate v.計(jì)算

Dear Lucy,

I learn from your letter that…

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lucy,

I learn from your letter that you are very interested in the story of Cao Chong weighed the elephant. Let me tell you：

Once somebody sent Cao Chong's father, Cao Cao, an elephant and he wanted to know its weight, but there was nothing big enough to weigh it．Cao Chong told his father he could weigh the elephant if he had a big boat and a lot of heavy stones．Cao Cao was very surprised, but he still ordered his men to get everything ready．When they led the elephant down into the boat, the water came up, then Cao Chong marked the water line．Then they drove the elephant onto the bank and put the heavy stones in the boat until the water came up to the same line．At last, Cao Chong told the men to weigh the stones．In this way, he weighed the elephant.

I think Cao Chong is very clever. If we think hard before doing things, we can do them better.

Yours

Thought

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求給美國筆友回信，給她講述曹沖稱象的故事，要求寫出回信的目的，結(jié)合圖片提示簡介故事并要寫出故事給人的啟示�；匦诺哪康暮凸适碌膯⑹居靡话悻F(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，故事簡介用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。故事按動(dòng)作先后順序進(jìn)行寫作，用第三人稱形式。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：書信第一段表明寫信目的：講述曹沖稱象的故事，開門見山，直奔主題。第二段講述曹沖稱象的故事，用and, but, when ,then , at last等引出故事，層次清楚，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，want to do, enough to do, order sb to do, tell sb to do sth等動(dòng)詞不定式短語使用得當(dāng)。第三段簡明扼要，說明只要肯動(dòng)腦，就可以把事情做好，表達(dá)了向曹沖學(xué)習(xí)的想法，突出并升華了故事主題。