Question

【題目】根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容的提示，以Changes in my hometown為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的

短文。要求包含所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，書寫整潔。

Answer 1

【答案】Changes in my hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown during the past few years. In the past, the roads were very dirty and narrow. What’s more, there was rubbish everywhere. People lived in low houses. They could only listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time. There were a lot of open spaces.

But now the dirty narrow roads have been turned into wide clean ones, with green trees, modern shops and tall buildings on both sides of them. People here have moved into new flats. More people have bought their own computers, mobile phones and even private cars!

I feel satisfied with life in my new hometown. I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以Changes in my hometown為題，介紹我的家鄉(xiāng)變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：the roads were……；There were……；People here have moved……；More people have bought……；I feel…..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。