Question

安全是我們成長(zhǎng)中最需要關(guān)注的話題。作為一個(gè)即將畢業(yè)的初三學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所提示的幾個(gè)方面，以“Safety First”為題對(duì)即將入學(xué)的初一新生提一些建議。

要求：
1．詞數(shù)90左右，文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2．條理清晰，語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。
Safety First
Dear friends, it is very important for us teenagers to be safe from danger both at home and at school. There are many things to be taken care of.
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Please always remember, 'Safety first'. Thank you.

Answer 1

Dear friends, it is very important for us teenagers to be safe from danger both at home and at the school. There are many things to be taken care of. When you are at school, always remember to wait in line because you are living in groups. Never jump the queue or push yourself into others. You should also avoid playing silly tricks on others especially when you are having after-school activeities.
The traffic is getting worse nowadays. Both car drivers and walkers should pay more attentions to the traffic signs and other rules. Never cross the road when the light is red. You should also eat healthy food at the school and home. Eat fewer snacks and exercise more.
It is also a good idea to be friendly to others and stay with some friends wherever you go.
Please always remember, ‘Safety first’. Thank you.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。
寫(xiě)出順序的詞來(lái)表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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