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3．假如你是來自希望中學(xué)的李華，即將開始高中的學(xué)習(xí)生活，面對新老師、新同學(xué)，請用英文做一下自我介紹，可以涵蓋以下內(nèi)容．
1．在家和學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)；
2．興趣與愛好；
3．對高中生活的展望．
要求：
1．除以上內(nèi)容外，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名或地名，否則不予賦分．
3.100詞左右；首尾句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
4．請?jiān)诖痤}卡指定位置作答，否則無效．
Hello，everybody!My name is Li Hua．I'm from the Hope Middle School．                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I am always ready to help others who are in trouble．我總是樂于幫助那些有困難的人．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾others．
【高分句型二】
I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party我唱歌跳舞都很好，我總是在學(xué)校聚會上表演．
so…that：如此…以至于．that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 Hello，everybody!My name is Li Hua．I'm from the Hope Middle School．I am very happy to stand here to talk about myself．I am a kind and helpful person．At school，I am always ready to help others who are in trouble．【高分句型一】I can sing and dance so well that I often give performances at our school party．【高分句型二】At home，I often help my parents do housework．I think doing housework is not only my parents'duty．（在家和學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)）
I can sing and dance well，I think they make me feel relaxed．a(chǎn)nd I often give performances at our school party．That makes me very well-known in my school．Also，I like reading，I think reading not only give me knowledge but also open my eyes to the world．（興趣與愛好）
In the senior high school，I will get on well with new classmates and teachers，and I will study harder，I hope I can learn how to learn better so that I can enter a good university．That's all!（對高中生活的展望）
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 涵蓋題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯．文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢．同時，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語，這為文章增色不少．在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，掌握一些常用句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．