Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

如今，很多家長(zhǎng)喜歡在社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上“曬”（post）自己孩子的照片，大家對(duì)其看法不一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的思維導(dǎo)圖提示，表述兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，并在此基礎(chǔ)上發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

要求：

注意事項(xiàng)：

1. 短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，省略號(hào)部分必須適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；書(shū)寫規(guī)范，條理清楚，行文連貫;

2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的個(gè)人或?qū)W校等相關(guān)信息；

3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：attitude 態(tài)度 Nowdays, it is common for parents to post children’s photos online. People take different attitudes toward it. _____________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, it is common for parents to post children’s photos online. People take different attitudes toward it. Some parents think it's easy to communicate with friends. It's easy to keep people in memory. In fact, this is a way to record life, watching her grow up day by day, my heart's happiness is unparalleled. But some people disagree with this view. They think some photos will be often used for advertising without permission. This may violate the child's right to portrait. Some people may be tired of these pictures. I think we should deal with the pictures when we expose the children's pictures. Never present detailed information about your child, including early warning platform. Be sure to include photos and identity information of your child.

【解析】

這是一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)圖表中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下在社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上“曬”（post）自己孩子的照片的利弊。所提供的圖表中列舉了兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，并在此基礎(chǔ)上發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含圖表中的全部信息，省略號(hào)部分必須適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；書(shū)寫規(guī)范，條理清楚，行文連貫。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

They think some photos will be often used for advertising without permission. 他們認(rèn)為有些照片通常會(huì)在未經(jīng)許可的情況下用于廣告宣傳。

some photos will be often used for advertising without permission. 做think的賓語(yǔ)。

【高分句型二】

I think we should deal with the pictures when we expose the children's pictures. 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該在曝光孩子們的照片時(shí)處理這些照片。

we should deal with the pictures when we expose the children's pictures. 做think的賓語(yǔ)。