Question

【題目】這是一個(gè)晴朗的星期天的上午，Tom和父母來(lái)到公園，他們看到很多人，有的在喝茶，有的在唱歌，有的在跳舞，有的孩子在一起嬉戲，有的……

請(qǐng)你展開(kāi)想象的翅膀，根據(jù)情景寫(xiě)篇短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】This is a fine Sunday morning, Tom and his parents come to the park. They see a lot of people there. Look! Three old men are sitting on the chair under a tree. They’re drinking tea. Some girls are singing and dancing near them. Some boys are playing football on the grass. Some women are sitting over there. They are talking. Not far from them, some children are playing together. There is a lake in the park. Some men are swimming in it. Everyone in the park is happy.

【解析】【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如come to the park，a lot of，on the chair，under a tree，drink tea，playing foot，on the grass，over there，far from，in the park等。而Some girls are singing and dancing near them./Some boys are playing football on the grass./Some women are sitting over there.三句連用構(gòu)成了排比句，增強(qiáng)了文勢(shì)，使內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。