Question

2．足夠的睡眠時間對學(xué)生來講很重要，然而調(diào)查顯示，許多學(xué)生睡眠不足．請根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，簡要指出學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因并提出建議．

要求：
1．要點齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：
2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
It's important for students to have enough sleeping time．However，many of them don't have enough time to sleep．
There are different reasons for it．Some students often spend too much time on
computer games so that they don't go to bed early．Some students have bad sleeping habits．They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed．This makes them too excited to fall asleep．
In order to get enough sleep，we should keep away from computer games．We shouldn't
stay up too late．What's more，we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft
music before we go to bed，which can help us have a sound sleep．
In a word，if we make good use of time and form good habits，we'll have enough sleepig time．Then we'll be happier and healthier．．

Answer 1

分析 解答本題時需要注意：足夠的睡眠時間對學(xué)生來講很重要，寫作時要重點指出學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因，敘述這些內(nèi)容的時候句子的時態(tài)必須用一般現(xiàn)在時，主語是第三人稱；最后提出建議的句子應(yīng)該用一般將來時，表示學(xué)生今后應(yīng)該如何做的事情．

解答 It's important for students to have enough sleeping time．However，many of them don't have enough time to sleep．
    There are different reasons for it．Some students often spend too much time on computer games so that they don't go to bed early．Some students have bad sleeping habits．They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed．This makes them too excited to fall asleep．
    In order to get enough sleep，we should keep away from computer games．We shouldn't stay up too late．What's more，we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music  before we go to bed，which can help us have a sound sleep．
   In a word，if we make good use of time and form good habits，we'll have enough sleepig time．Then we'll be happier and healthier．

點評 本篇是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文．寫作的關(guān)鍵是要抓住文章的中心內(nèi)容來寫，把學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因?qū)懬宄�并提出建議．寫作時，要先確定好時態(tài)，再注意謂語動詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達流暢．在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．