Question

15．越來越多汽車進入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大地危害．作為中學生，我們應該怎么做呢？請根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（80詞左右）．
提示：1．遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道、過斑馬線 （crosswalk）．
2．別在街道上或馬路上玩耍．
3．勸父母不能酒后駕車．
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With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalk．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．Don't play on the road，we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving etc．
It's good that cars are coming into our life．But when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business，we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是針對交通安全說說看法和建議．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道、過斑馬線 （crosswalk）．
2．別在街道上或馬路上玩耍．
3．勸父母不能酒后駕車．
常用到的重點短語：
obey rules 遵守規(guī)則
tell sb not to do sth 讓某人不要做某事
go across 穿過
【高分句型】
1．①With ②more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy③that it has greatly improved our life．
①with短語表伴隨．
②比較級+and+比較級，越來越…
③that引導的賓語從句．
2．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．
when引導的時間狀語從句．

解答 With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．【高分句型】But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．（總述，引出下文）
Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on sidewalk．When we cross crosswalk，stop and look both ways，then go across fast．【高分句型】（遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道、過斑馬線）Don't play on the road，（別在街道上或馬路上玩耍）we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving etc．（勸父母不能酒后駕車）
It's good that cars are coming into our life．But when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business，we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．

點評 提綱作文是一項能夠充分考查學生語言綜合運用能力的題型．主要考查學生運用已學的語言基礎(chǔ)知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．為了提高書面表達水平，平時應加強閱讀，應背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學生力所能及且行之有效的練習寫作的好方法．