Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列對(duì)鹽城濕地的描寫寫一篇90詞左右的短文。

要點(diǎn)：1. 鹽城， 江蘇北部的一個(gè)城市，以其擁有的濕地而出名。最大濕地面積450，000多

公頃(hectare)，是眾多瀕危鳥類的理想棲息地。

2.食物豐富，有許多昆蟲和多種植物。

3. 許多鳥類在那兒生活，最有名的是丹頂鶴，每年許多丹頂鶴在這兒過冬。

4. 自己的感想。（至少兩點(diǎn)）

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Answer 1

【答案】

Yancheng is a city in the north of Jiangsu . It is famous for its wetlands. The biggest wetland there has an area of more than 45,000 hectares. It's an ideal shelter for many endangered birds.

There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the wetland. They provide birds with enough food. So there are lots of birds living in the wetlands. The red-crowned cranes are the most famous birds in Yancheng wetlands. Every year, a lot of red-crowned cranes stay here for winter.

Wetlands are perfect homes for birds and animals, we must take actions to protect our wetlands. If wedon't, it will be impossible to see many endangered birds in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹鹽城濕地的情況，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如There are a lot of insects and many kinds of plants in the wetland. They provide birds with enough food. So there are lots of birds living in the wetlands.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。