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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

近年來(lái),由于網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的興起,11月11日成了網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物狂歡節(jié)。2018年雙十天貓只花了2分05秒,成交額(GMV)超過(guò)100億元。為了正確引導(dǎo)青少年的購(gòu)物觀念,你班舉行了一次關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物的主題班會(huì),下面是你班同學(xué)對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的一些見(jiàn)解,請(qǐng)你以班長(zhǎng)的身份,寫(xiě)一篇主題班會(huì)內(nèi)容小結(jié)發(fā)言稿:

優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.在家“逛商場(chǎng)”;節(jié)約時(shí)間;

2.價(jià)格通常比較便宜;

3.可供選擇的范圍廣,品種多。

缺點(diǎn): 1.只能看到圖片,看不到商品本身

2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不太安全,密碼容易被盜。

（寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容）

1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物優(yōu)缺點(diǎn);

2.給你班同學(xué)提一條你自己的建議。

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1.詞數(shù)80-100;包含表格內(nèi)的所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

2.請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)姓名與學(xué)校名稱

3.語(yǔ)句通順,語(yǔ)法正確,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

參考詞匯:消費(fèi)者 consumer密碼 password(s)

Dear classmates

With the rapid development of Internet, shopping online has already become a fashion, especially among young people. Comparing with the traditional shopping. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Let 's stop buying blindly but be a smart consumer. Thank you

Answer 1

【答案】例文

Dear classmates,

With the rapid development of Internet, shopping online has already become a fashion, especially among young people. Comparing with the traditional shopping,Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

However， Shopping online also has some disadvantages. On one hand, consumers can only see pictures, you can't see the goods themselves on the Internet. That may cause consumers to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. On the other hand, the network payment is not safe enough, and the password is easy to be stolen.

Let 's stop buying blindly but be a smart consumer. Thank you.

【解析】

題干解讀：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)列出提綱，短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫(xiě)作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。