Question

17．越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來了很多問題，如塞車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害．作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？
請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文．．（80字左右）
內(nèi)容包含：遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線．別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球．
勸父母不能酒后駕車．你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然．
參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑馬線注：第一段已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)．
With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life隨著越來越多的汽車走進(jìn)我們的家庭，我們很高興它大大改善了我們的生活．這是由with作伴隨狀語，意思是"隨著…"，we are happy that是一個(gè)主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的句式，后面引導(dǎo)一個(gè)表語從句，后面是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示對現(xiàn)在造成的影響．
高分句型二：For example，we must walk on walk side，when we cross zebra-crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast例如，我們必須走在一邊，當(dāng)我們過斑馬線時(shí)，停止，看右，左，然后快速經(jīng)過．這是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，for example是一個(gè)固定短語，意思是例如．

解答 With more and more cars coming into our families，we are happy that it has greatly improved our life（高分句型一）（開門見山說明汽車的積極作用）．But unluckily，it has also brought many problems，such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents（說明汽車帶來的負(fù)面作用）．
        Traffic safety is everybody's business．We must obey the rules．For example，we must walk on walk side，when we cross zebra-crossing，stop，look right and left，and then go across fast（高分句型二）．Don't play football on the road．we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive，not to run through red lights，not to talk and laugh while driving．（具體闡明我們的作法）
        We can say cars are coming into our life，but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safely driving on roads and walking on sidewalks．（總結(jié)全文）

點(diǎn)評 在寫作時(shí)，要盡量使用高分單詞，短語和句子，句式，以便為文章增色．