Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

公共秩序，你我有責(zé)。假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的張濤，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，描述不文明行為，并倡議同學(xué)們遵守公共秩序(obey public rules)，共創(chuàng)良好公共環(huán)境。

不良 行為	spit(吐痰)here and there play with public facilities (設(shè)備)
文明 行為	校內(nèi)	圖書(shū)館：保持安靜；及時(shí)歸還圖書(shū)。 食堂(canteen)：排隊(duì)等候；不浪費(fèi)食物。 教室：不在課桌上涂畫(huà)；不追逐打鬧。
	校外	1． 馬路上：…… 2． 公園里：……

要求：1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 自擬至少兩點(diǎn)文明行為的倡議，不重復(fù)所給信息；

3. 文章不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù):

4. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整；

5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。

My dear friends,

Each of us has the duty to obey public rules. Let’s say no to the bad behavior.

.

Finally. I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.

Zhang Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

My dear friends.

Each of us has the duty to obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.

Now, we can still see some people spit here and there. Sometimes, naughty children play with public facilities. Besides, a few people say bad words at each other.

I think each of us should develop good behaviour. In the school library, we should keep quiet. We should also return the books in time. In the canteen, we should wait in line. We‘d better not waste any food. In the classroom, we mustn't write or draw on our desks. And it's dangerous to run after each other or fight with others.

We need to obey public rules outside the school as well. When we cross a road, please wait for the green light. While we are enjoying ourselves in the park, remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there.

Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public place we will have.

Zhang Tao

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。